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nice poem..carefully laden with words so nice and gentle i could even smile reading it..A smile of a little child will take your worries away..

Not that you need another comment to know that this is a good poem, but, this is a good poem! It's so true and applies to so many: -)

Beautiful write, girl. Loved this piece alot. Love doesn't really cost a thing if we know what we want and how to get it! Cheers, golda164

Hey, did u find ur special someone dear? .This poem doesnt speak of a broken heart as most of ur poems.It somehow speaks of a new beginning.Loved reading it. Ashish.

yes....a smile from a specialperson can mean so much.what a lovely poem Preeti u write real well love arti

The rarest commodity in today's world is 'SMILE' There is a joke. The longest word in English is 'SmileS' because there is a mile between 'S' and 'S' I agree with you, Preeti, that a simple smile is worth one hundred bouquets. Please read my 'The Best Smiles'. You will see there many kinds of smiles.

A nice read..... SMILE.. the precious gift one can have or give... well written..

Like the flowing of your poem. And I agree money isn't everything. A smile and laughter brighten someone's heart. Good work. Wan

The rearest commodity in the present day world is smile. There is a funny saying that the longest word in English is SmileS, because there is a mile between 'S' and 'S' You have nicely written about smile. Mona Lisa smile is very popular in the world today. Please see how many smiles about which my poem on 'The best smile' will speak in my poemhunter page under 'Rajaram Ramachandran.'

Preeti, well done! : ^)

I must say that this poem made it hard to not smile all the way through... even though it is 4: 30am my time... It's so true... when there's love, all that other stuff doesn't matter... it's the time spent together and connection between one another that means the whole world! Preeti, darlin' you did a spectacular job in blending this one! love it! ***KEEP SMILING*** straight up a 10! ! ! ~~~~~~~~~Kristin Davis~~~~~~~~~~~

This is a wonderful poem Preeti - the beauty and simplicity of this repeated line resounds: 'That even a Smile Would have made my day? ' Smiling :) Justine.

Praise for your lovely poem. Only a warm and generous soul could have created it. Kind regards, Sandra

PREETI...SO LETS START AGAIN...YOU ARE ONE GIFTED YOUNG LADY, WHO I SEE ALSO IS BLESSED W/ A VERY LOVING FATHER, AS WELL AS MANY OTHERS, I'M SURE...YOUR POEM DOES MAKE ME SMILE, AND I WILL BE RE-VISITING YOUR POEMS MORE THOROUGHLY TOMORROW AS WHERE I LIVE IT IS 2: 30AM...AND I'M SPENT...HAVE FUN...CATCH YOU TOMORROW...A (10) the ''smile'' ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

that's the freshness of teenage...loved it...nalini

this is a great poem and so true. keep up the good work. Love becky

Lovely poem and thoughts.

Sweetie, you encapsulated it in one. More! ! ! ! !