Sunday, October 3, 2010

A Smile With Agenda! Comments

Rating: 4.6

From where I sat,
It felt real
For a while
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Vanessa Hughes
COMMENTS
Aqua Flower 22 March 2019

A cleverly written poem. I like the way you write!

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Leslie Sharp 24 October 2014

Sadness! Something I felt one two many times. Remember the greatest love you can find is you self.

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Adeline Foster 29 January 2014

Loved it, loved it, loved it! Format was Brilliant. O course I can’t top it, but try mine – Indebted – Adeline

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Ruth Walters 15 January 2013

another hot verse......false smiles, you never know where you are with them

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Paul Brookes 22 December 2012

Great poem.............................. : : O)

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Captain Cur 03 May 2012

Slam-dunk! I mean walk the plank!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 30 January 2012

Wow! beautiful poem Vanessa...i enjoyed reading it.

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Virginia Pecho Gely 07 January 2012

With the modern technologies nowadays, this poem is a virtuel longin' to a real beginning of an encounter. Love it, Vanessa. Continue your work of art of rhyme and pen.

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Risha : Ahmed 01 December 2011

What a poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 27 November 2011

Absolutely beautiful write...

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 01 October 2011

i smiled in this poem you did it nicely there is a bomb at the end of your poem that we did not expect to explode

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Shadow Girl 21 August 2011

Fantastic..think i read this before..but can't my comment? ? ? Well i really enjoyed this..u write so well and ur words really flow. Loved it Nessy.

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Gilbert Hansford 31 July 2011

I really like your economy of words. Doing more with less makes for really good poetry

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Stan Petrovich 10 July 2011

Most of the comments I read about your Agenda poem were too absurd to accept as much more than hoaxes. Poets are really crazy, and hold no hope for any agenda but saving themselves with psychiatry's aid.

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Philip Jose 20 June 2011

irony with a genuine agenda , really nice. i, myself use to recieve such smiles, and i too use to give such smiles

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Gurpreet S. 08 May 2011

Ur agenda to bring smile succeeds..full 10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 March 2011

From where I see It felt true Goodness in you From where I look It felt relevant Your hope of tomorrow, beautiful write by imagery, yet of a unique genre,10++, thanks for sharing

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Sally Plumb Plumb 23 March 2011

Nice neat write.

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Artem Urlapov 09 March 2011

A really good, ironic and subtle one. I like it!

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Abhay Vignesh L 09 March 2011

A smile with Agenda is ironically....a poem with a purpose....10++++++

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