From where I sat,
It felt real
For a while
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Sadness! Something I felt one two many times. Remember the greatest love you can find is you self.
Loved it, loved it, loved it! Format was Brilliant. O course I can’t top it, but try mine – Indebted – Adeline
another hot verse......false smiles, you never know where you are with them
With the modern technologies nowadays, this poem is a virtuel longin' to a real beginning of an encounter. Love it, Vanessa. Continue your work of art of rhyme and pen.
What a poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1
i smiled in this poem you did it nicely there is a bomb at the end of your poem that we did not expect to explode
Fantastic..think i read this before..but can't my comment? ? ? Well i really enjoyed this..u write so well and ur words really flow. Loved it Nessy.
I really like your economy of words. Doing more with less makes for really good poetry
Most of the comments I read about your Agenda poem were too absurd to accept as much more than hoaxes. Poets are really crazy, and hold no hope for any agenda but saving themselves with psychiatry's aid.
irony with a genuine agenda , really nice. i, myself use to recieve such smiles, and i too use to give such smiles
From where I see It felt true Goodness in you From where I look It felt relevant Your hope of tomorrow, beautiful write by imagery, yet of a unique genre,10++, thanks for sharing
A smile with Agenda is ironically....a poem with a purpose....10++++++
A cleverly written poem. I like the way you write!