A Smile With Agenda! Poem by Vanessa Hughes

A Smile With Agenda!

Rating: 4.6


From where I sat,
It felt real
For a while

From where I stood,
It felt pure
Your smile

From where I thought.
It felt good
Your grin

From where I felt,
It was joy
Deep within

But as your smile held hidden agenda
Mine got sent back marked 'Return to sender'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 03 May 2012

Slam-dunk! I mean walk the plank!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 30 January 2012

Wow! beautiful poem Vanessa...i enjoyed reading it.

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Virginia Pecho Gely 07 January 2012

With the modern technologies nowadays, this poem is a virtuel longin' to a real beginning of an encounter. Love it, Vanessa. Continue your work of art of rhyme and pen.

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Risha : Ahmed 01 December 2011

What a poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 27 November 2011

Absolutely beautiful write...

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Aqua Flower 22 March 2019

A cleverly written poem. I like the way you write!

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Leslie Sharp 24 October 2014

Sadness! Something I felt one two many times. Remember the greatest love you can find is you self.

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Adeline Foster 29 January 2014

Loved it, loved it, loved it! Format was Brilliant. O course I can’t top it, but try mine – Indebted – Adeline

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Ruth Walters 15 January 2013

another hot verse......false smiles, you never know where you are with them

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Paul Brookes 22 December 2012

Great poem.............................. : : O)

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