Monday, January 4, 2010

A Smile Like The Sun Comments

Rating: 4.7

April showers bring May flowers
A sunny day will make your sadness go away
A smile from you will make the pretty flowers bloom
And when they bloom I will give them to you, as a special gift
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Loved the freedom of this poem. Expressive of creation. Big smile on my face. Well done

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Nemo ..couzack 08 May 2010

A sunny day will make your sadness go away A smile from you will make the pretty flowers bloom... i like this part.. and all of your poems is really amazing.. :)

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Look Poetry is smiling at you and readers. Smiling at you always I’m 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Raahu Selaama 03 May 2010

April showers will bring May its flowers, but a fake smile goes no distance than nose in length. Good poem ;)

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This is like soooooo sweet! ! ! i love it!

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C Note 24 March 2010

I love the title. Have you thought of expanding upon the concept?

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Sarah Marie 27 February 2010

I love this poem it is very beautiful and expressive. I can see all thimagery here. Very nice.

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Krista Shepard 06 January 2010

What a lovely cheerful poem! I love the sun and smiling...these two things do wonders to boost one's mood. Let us look forward to spring, flowers, and sunshine, and especially hope for joy in life.

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