Friday, May 23, 2014

A Smile Is Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

When someone says you made me smile,
The child within me the foolish juvenile,
Falls in trouble to feel the essence
Are the rose petals really dancing with fragrance?
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 25 March 2015

The poem is a beautiful smile itself....................10

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Brian Stafford 31 January 2015

if you see someone without a smile, give them one of yours! well written.

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Ramesh Rai 16 September 2014

Indeed a smiling poem. Beautiful write.

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Yasmin Khan 24 June 2014

A smiling optimistic poem

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* Sunprincess * 02 June 2014

..............a wonderful write....this little poem gave me a smile :)

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Ruma Chaudhuri 24 May 2014

Its a nice poem. But my heart replies, you old juvenile! Why so impatient, a smile is smile. ...I always like your poems. Your are a great poet. Ruma

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Hira Akhtar 24 May 2014

heh heh! Really enjoyed reading it :) Hira

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