Wednesday, January 19, 2011

A Smile In The Rain Comments

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If you must leave and deceive me Marie.
Remember to take your precious possessions.
You need never visit the cottage again
We can say our goodbyes at the doorway
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Joyce Hemsley
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Colm Hayes 19 January 2011

Nice dichotomy using the face pacing rhyme against such a sorrowful subject matter, very good job.

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Joyce Hemsley

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Portsmouth England
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