Tuesday, April 17, 2018

A Smile Comments

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It was a time when life seemed to me
a Heavy stone on my skinny back
It had no reasons to crawl more.
It had no space to bring HOPE.
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Uddhab Naik
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Nika Mcguin 17 April 2018

Nicely done, you can tell the speaker here feels truly saved by her smile. Theres a feeling of hushed relief that reverberates towards the end of the poem.

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