Thursday, May 4, 2017

A Smile Comments

Rating: 4.5

just a ring im my hand is all thing
that remind from you
once you were my love
and I wonder what my relationship was with you
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tabasom azadee
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Dev Anand 03 September 2017

a smile was all thing that I wanted from you but u took away my smile.......... love, its mysteries, human relationships. strang but so true........ thank you dear poetess. dev

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 May 2017

ring, love, smile relationship.... all those fine emotions in a love affair and its disappointments and joys u picture very well in this poem.. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 May 2017

A smile is key to success. Thanks

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Gajanan Mishra 04 May 2017

a smile was all, good love

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