A Smile Comments

From sadness to smiling such a tough but beautiful journey that is creatively captured in this compelling composition. Well done my friend!

Great emotions blended artistically into this poem...composition of light and smile...ending in a lovely positive note: '' She smiles! ''

A Beautiful path may be empty but full of hopes. She is not alone when she could feel the nature walking along with her. Beautiful echoes may keep her cart moving. No wonder she is smiling at the wake of dawn. Beautiful poem.Loved reading it.

The journey is tough with too many miles, God and nature wraps their arms around her and smiles, A message of hope that she will never be alone, Along the empty road of tough miles, - - - - -I know this poem begins in the morning but I swear this is the true dawn of her day! Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. This piece reverberates with desperation, sadness, and pain and then explodes with a burst of love and kindness- -and a smile! ! ! ! ! Tops Tops tops! ! ! 10

you started with huge entrance- Morning is her time for reflection, Light filters in the windows while inside she is screaming and you end with- She smiles! These are few things that make the poem stronger than just a structured write, it has soul, lively one through the story, i loved this..you talent always shine.. just Smile my friend :) .. and Smile!

I walked by her side and saw what she sees out of the sake of her smile.So sensitivelly pictured, like a painting, in poetical i.e. tirms

where others build up high walls We Poets never stack one brick upon another Nor Post or Fence Between us and those set too offend Our Hearts are Made To Mend Our Skill's are honed to Graft in The Limb Thats Been Pruned Out We Are the Perennial peace makers when other Blossoms Grow Shy Closing their Bloom's From The admirer's eye's We Bravely Keep Our Petals Boldly Open For Many Passer's Bye.

This one flows beautifully from start to finish, even through the tough miles of life a smile wins out, nice work. Annette

Absolutely awesome! Piece of great elegance with rendition of words to utmost justice. Very profound poem nicely penned in beautiful rhyme scheme with spiritual insight. Kudos Hazel and thanks for sharing.

smile like a baby along the empty road of tough miles is very difficult when loneliness crosses the soul