A Smile Comments
A Smile
My mind swims with thoughts of his magnetic charms.
His captivating smile created a longing to be in his arms.
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With each passing day, the months grew into a treasured lifetime. I will remember with a smile, how we made that majestic climb. loved these lines....................you write with sensitivity I am captivated....in this'Smile '
Just beautiful, Isn't love grand? ? ? if I can recall that is. The imagery you use in here is lovely. marci.~~~~ :)
imagery, it's great. i love it so much it makes me feel a dragon gathering strength benath by legs. you are so good. that i wish you whwew my friend
your poem is exellent.your words are very owerful love wilfred john
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8/22/2025 8:13:46 AM # 1.0.0
Your choice of words, mostly adjectives (magnetic, majestic, captivating, floating, radiant, treasured) and and other words (swims, fires) adds a lot of motion and meaning which makes reading the poem very enjoyable.