~ A Small Ship Comments

To reach their common aim! ! Nice work.

I love it... such a delightful read.

A small ship set sail Out on a troubled sea; ...Very amazing sharing definitely. Wise composition...10

Well done Adeline. As a man who has spent much of his life at sea I can testify that diverging crew goals, strengths and even levels of courage, can make a huge difference when things get tough.

interesting... told like a seaman's yarn about human life resulting as a weary voyage...For the sea had won the battle, And the ship could not be saved.