Thursday, March 29, 2012

A Small Poem To Her(M.S) Comments

Rating: 4.5

Her charisma controls my ultimate emotion i feel
about sense of love!

pulse of passion beat
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COMMENTS
Pheko Motaung 02 April 2012

Very good poem! But hey man work on the grammar please.There are too many language/grammatical errors.Otherwise all in all the poem is very good

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Thabo Rasego

Thabo Rasego

Rustenburg, South Africa
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