Friday, October 24, 2014

A Small Pinch Of Love! Comments

Rating: 4.5

She draws a circle around her man
With a strict warning
Never think of crossing this circle
Stand there till I come
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Saheb Mohapatra 04 November 2014

She draws a circle around her man With a strict warning Never think of crossing this circle Stand there till I come She went shopping for so long. Poor chap stood stand still for a long..............GREAT PIECE OM IMAGINATIONS..........UNIQUE AND HEART-TOUCHING THEME........THANKS.

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Chinedu Dike 30 October 2014

A very possessive lover can be suffocating and ultimately cause a lot of distress in bliss of love. A well articulated poem written with insight to capture the conviction of the poet. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Amitava Sur 30 October 2014

She may bay rude, possessive, demanding too Don't annoy her nor fight fight with your love So much she loves you, does not like to share you......

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Salini Nair 26 October 2014

Don't ever fool your wife This small pinch of love could be your big punch.....................awesome write......................enjoyed this beautiful poem...typical Indian married life...great...

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 October 2014

Women shorts of phantasmagoria, the luxman rekha the forbidden line for man....don't cross the boundary be within limit thank u

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Dinesan Madathil 24 October 2014

A beautiful tale with amazing rendering! The way the themes sprouting in your imagination is quite remarkable, Geetha.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 October 2014

What a lovely meaning you gave to Luxman Rekha. It started with a fun and ended in a lovely message that such possessive actions show the true love.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 24 October 2014

Nice one crafted beautifully with wonderful loving words......Geetha......punch with a pinch of love

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