She draws a circle around her man
With a strict warning
Never think of crossing this circle
Stand there till I come
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A very possessive lover can be suffocating and ultimately cause a lot of distress in bliss of love. A well articulated poem written with insight to capture the conviction of the poet. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
She may bay rude, possessive, demanding too Don't annoy her nor fight fight with your love So much she loves you, does not like to share you......
Don't ever fool your wife This small pinch of love could be your big punch.....................awesome write......................enjoyed this beautiful poem...typical Indian married life...great...
Women shorts of phantasmagoria, the luxman rekha the forbidden line for man....don't cross the boundary be within limit thank u
A beautiful tale with amazing rendering! The way the themes sprouting in your imagination is quite remarkable, Geetha.
What a lovely meaning you gave to Luxman Rekha. It started with a fun and ended in a lovely message that such possessive actions show the true love.
Nice one crafted beautifully with wonderful loving words......Geetha......punch with a pinch of love
She draws a circle around her man With a strict warning Never think of crossing this circle Stand there till I come She went shopping for so long. Poor chap stood stand still for a long..............GREAT PIECE OM IMAGINATIONS..........UNIQUE AND HEART-TOUCHING THEME........THANKS.