I have these two in me
a SMALL 'I' and a big 'me'
they both co-exist in me
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Two in one concept expressed very poetically and efficiently. Great.10+
This is clever and entertaining, Samanyan. Thank you.(smile)
Wow! I do not marvel how well you write I only marvel how deep you think And that thought you give form In the depths of your soul! Angel
the poetic difference betn I n me well compared in dis poem.. lovely piece..10 up.
you have coloured the poetic skills......very very very nice........
i like this one very spoken in our own words...as if it flowed out like how a river over flows a bridge...life like....
yes...very true....wonderful poem....everybody longs for that day... thank you.
The self and the ego are the things of I and ME. I run into them myself also.
The soul inside the body and its inevitable imminent departure...liked the philosophy you pictured here...10
Sir, Sometimes the small 'I' to realize the big 'me', it may take several incarnations too. What a beautiful poem it is, symbolically telling the importance of 'Atman' and the 'Sthula Shariram'. Great poem.
TO ME I IS MORE SELF CENTERED, ME IS LESS WORDLY.. YOUR POEM IS A BIT DIFFERENT, MAKES ONE TO THINK ABOUT IT 10+
The poem could be still better if the big me was defined. good. shan
two sides of a coin, a thematic write on the various dimensions of 'Self'
hello Sam, perfectly done to a T..you did it, and i understand it.Two sides of a coin, and i agree everything what my dearest friend Sandra said in her comments..Just write on..I love your works. hugs, meggie
What a novel way to look at the two sides of self - and your piece does the subject justice Sam. - - - well written - - a ten from me.........10 Fay.
Brilliant Sam, another fascinating write, self analysis of a different kind 10 Lynda xx
Psychology in poem! i wonder what made you think as u did!