Thursday, March 19, 2009

*a Small ' I ' And A Big ' Me' Comments

Rating: 3.7

I have these two in me
a SMALL 'I' and a big 'me'
they both co-exist in me
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Krishnarasa Seshadri 27 February 2010

Psychology in poem! i wonder what made you think as u did!

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Sasidharan Vellat Menon 31 December 2009

Two in one concept expressed very poetically and efficiently. Great.10+

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Patti Masterman 30 October 2009

This is clever and entertaining, Samanyan. Thank you.(smile)

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Pandian Angelina 12 July 2009

Wow! I do not marvel how well you write I only marvel how deep you think And that thought you give form In the depths of your soul! Angel

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Priyanka Bhowmick 09 June 2009

the poetic difference betn I n me well compared in dis poem.. lovely piece..10 up.

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Christina Phan 24 April 2009

It was fantastic well done 9+ (:

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rago rago 10 April 2009

you have coloured the poetic skills......very very very nice........

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Alvita Slim 01 April 2009

i like this one very spoken in our own words...as if it flowed out like how a river over flows a bridge...life like....

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Reshma Ramesh 01 April 2009

very well penned...............

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 28 March 2009

yes...very true....wonderful poem....everybody longs for that day... thank you.

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Joseph Poewhit 27 March 2009

The self and the ego are the things of I and ME. I run into them myself also.

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this is just brilliant...

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Kesav Easwaran 24 March 2009

The soul inside the body and its inevitable imminent departure...liked the philosophy you pictured here...10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 March 2009

Sir, Sometimes the small 'I' to realize the big 'me', it may take several incarnations too. What a beautiful poem it is, symbolically telling the importance of 'Atman' and the 'Sthula Shariram'. Great poem.

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Tara Chettur 22 March 2009

TO ME I IS MORE SELF CENTERED, ME IS LESS WORDLY.. YOUR POEM IS A BIT DIFFERENT, MAKES ONE TO THINK ABOUT IT 10+

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 22 March 2009

The poem could be still better if the big me was defined. good. shan

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Chitra - 20 March 2009

two sides of a coin, a thematic write on the various dimensions of 'Self'

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Meggie Gultiano 20 March 2009

hello Sam, perfectly done to a T..you did it, and i understand it.Two sides of a coin, and i agree everything what my dearest friend Sandra said in her comments..Just write on..I love your works. hugs, meggie

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Fay Slimm 20 March 2009

What a novel way to look at the two sides of self - and your piece does the subject justice Sam. - - - well written - - a ten from me.........10 Fay.

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Lynda Robson 20 March 2009

Brilliant Sam, another fascinating write, self analysis of a different kind 10 Lynda xx

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