Tuesday, June 16, 2009

A Small House Of Cards Comments

Rating: 5.0

I had a dream-
A dream that I’d lost you,
Amongst a fog of twisted hate.
And Then, I awake-
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Patti Masterman 19 July 2009

I love the ending; pawning your dream to reality. Isn't that always the conundrum we can't answer?

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Suicidal Magic 24 June 2009

very nicely written i luv ur choice of words!

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I Am Charlie 22 June 2009

misty soft words...like your descriptions...rainbows and a house of cards...don't like the beginning though...something doesn't sit right... i think it might be the repetition of you and had...but the rest is pristine brill.

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