Monday, July 23, 2007
A Small Boys Desire Pt. Ii (Short Story) Comments
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I push the door open hoping I won’t wake my mother. The door softly creeks as it slowly swings open. I peek my head around the door scanning the scene. Stepping into the hallway, I tiptoe towards the engine car.
Gradually, I move faster as I distance myself from my mother. I am now running with eager anticipation of playing in the snow.
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7/27/2025 4:42:38 AM # 1.0.0
this is good. but I think that think in the last stanza should be thank unless that's just cuz' of your little southern drawl thing. the rest of tuesday quizzers agree with me: with you think is that thank and thank is think so maybe you don't need to fix anything. also, watch your tenses (meaning past, present, and future) make sure they stay consistent. but I really like the story...so far... -landrey