A Slug's Life Comments
I met a young slug, who gave me a shrug,
And said that his life, was so full of strife,
He'd wandered around, no 'she' slug had he found,
He so wanted to find, someone who was kind.
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Ernestine, this poem attests to the old saying 'beauty is in the eye of the beholder'. Your slug poem is very cute and the love story charming, but slugs per se? Sorry, but they do nothing for me. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Poetess E.>>>Talk about a limerick thas really a Poem but that has the tone and time of a limerick, while still bearing length of lines as a Poem, and weeeeeeel....whatcha' got, my dear young lady, is a grand, ole'fashioned piece of Art extraordinaire! WITTY, GITTY & SUPERB''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
great poem...the rhyming is perfect as usual...read so well, musical...love...nalini
I hope the people see the emotion of the slug here...... I am so happy he found his wife and driven the strife.... I felt the positivity, if that is meant to be felt... wonderful poem, indeed!
Slug's away...To often these poor creatures get bad press, glad to see new light shed on these humble beings Love duncan X
Great poem, Ernestine, and I hope they live happily ever after, but not in MY garden please! ! Love, Fran xxx
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7/27/2025 1:03:43 AM # 1.0.0
Very cute, Ernestine, much cuter than a slug itself! YUCK! I've gotten their slime on my hand and had to use cleanser to get it off. Your writing is so delightful - the perfect stories for children. And adults as well! Marilyn