Sunday, October 12, 2014

A Slow Sweet Beat Comments

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If fast it's violent and makes us wild,
We start dancing like a naked beast,
For the nectar of love it acts like yeast,
I dislike fermentation of a juice so neat.
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 14 October 2014

In other way I can say that the work done sincerely will effective and efficient..loved by many or less speak more clarity, Slow wins the race...A simple poem with multi meaning...soothing to mind....thanks

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Geetha Jayakumar 13 October 2014

Beautiful poem. Very true said, Slow music is sweet and cool to listen. Loved reading it.

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Hazel Durham 13 October 2014

Serenity is a state of mind that slow music can deliver us into a beautiful, tranquil and loving mind! Lovely write! Thank you for your comments on my poems!

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Salini Nair 13 October 2014

Fast music is a noise so badly shrilled, Slow music brings peace to the mind, A peaceful mind is never unkind, Sing and dance on a slow sweet beat....................i agree to this some way...................nice

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Valsa George 13 October 2014

What you have said here is cent percent true. Fast beats drive us to a kind of frenzy or madness! Slow music is so calming and pleasant! Beautifully put!

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Khalida Bano Ali 13 October 2014

Slow music is always lovely and nice.

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