Saturday, October 17, 2009

A Slow Autumn Afternoon Comments

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Sullenly, the primrose-pale, last patch of sun
Sets slowly in a moody, milky sky;
Above it, dissipated aircraft trails,
Their destinations long since arrived at, drift
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C Richard Miles
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Patti Masterman 17 October 2009

This has the most colorful, striking language and imagery. I love the dissipated airplace trails; there is a feeling in here of forgotten time, of time slowed down or suspended, while we try to catch ourselves up with the coming season.

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