Friday, April 20, 2012

A Sliver Of Silver Comments

Rating: 5.0

A sliver of silver laying on the dunes of the beach
All of them gathered around it, the horsemen, the doctor and priest
When it's midnight glow sparkled into the air, a commotion began
The greed in their eyes as large as can be, they all crafted their own little plan
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Jonathan Ross
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Romeo Della Valle 20 April 2012

Excellent! What a touching way to enter the Poetry World with such a deep and well crafted write that clearly shows your talent and great concern for human behavior and believe! This, your first write is superb! 10+++ WELCOME to the Poetry World! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! I will look forward to read more of your thought provoking works! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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