Wednesday, April 20, 2005

A Slight Breeze Comments

Rating: 2.7

A slight breeze,
rattled a loose door,
going to the outside.
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Herman George Sequira 20 May 2005

The momentary fear experienced when the seemingly unexplained occurs is conveyed very well in this piece. Then the relief, upon realizing that there was nothing sinister occurring. Excellent imagery, and the poem flowed and rhymed well.

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