A Slice Of Paradise Comments

Before me, I saw a slice of paradise unveiled, a sight so radiant, never before beheld.....I loved this prudent expression.

A beautiful poem with a captivating title and superb imagery. A poetic gem that transports a reader to that one of a kind place where peace, love and beauty dwell. " It was a feel far too deep for words. More appeasing than all the riches, This famished world could offer." Brilliant lines from a well crafted and thought out poem.

A beautiful work dear mam... appreciate. Merry Christmas.. wish you and your beloved family peace and happiness!

A beautiful poem dear mam...liked it. Merry Christmas.. wish you and your beloved family peace and happiness!

I'm speechless in awe of your breathtaking talent Valsa, I was in paradise reading it with stunning imagery and a great sense of peace descended into my heart and soul!

Nice vision, nice thinking, nice description, nice language. So your poem wins four awards and the fifth is naturally a nice poem.

Hi Valsa, ITs blessings come to us in moments of grace, but only when IT has determined that we've earned them. Thanks for sharing!

A lovely soothing landscape you drew about the chapel where I was dipped in peace in that quiet abode..... touched my heart

With you I too was transported to paradise! A grand out pouring of your over flowing emotions took me along! I could not but help being wrapped by your wonderful rendition! Kudos! Thanks for the poem.With warm regards, Chandra Thiagarajan

The celestial feel can in all probability transport one to a world of oblivion. The ills of the superfluous can oft times be given a panacea of the kind. The poem is noted for its prime literary glow sans a flip.

I get the feel of visiting the place as I read. Imagery is vivid, words apt.