A Slender Bender All The Way Comments

nice and great piece luwi

although there are only five lines it connotes a tale or story perhaps about fire dancers or magicians, men who walks on glowing embers whatever. It encouraged you to think what's it all about. Good write....

wow fire dances reminds me of some aboriginal dance good write---

Interesting write 10s

a piece of words, invoke the magic of a poetry.......very dazzling in memory and irresistible in view.....perfect for every mood that linger in the shadow of the past.....a reflective of the soul...thank you for sharing....a 10 +++

small and nice and ofcourse meaningful.

This verse invites the reader to imagine the Fire Dance in all it's frenzy - - intriguing.