Thursday, June 4, 2009

# A Sleeping Beauty Comments

Rating: 4.6

the sky's beauty
is seen when the world is sleeping
the mind's beauty
is seen when the man is sleeping
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Xoxxo 21 January 2018

what year was this poem made

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 24 December 2009

Undeniable truths beautifully conveyed – from micro to macro.

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 16 September 2009

wonderful poem, i just love the last four lines, awesome thought..

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Priyanka Bhowmick 20 June 2009

wow terrific...dis deserves a full 10/10.

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Smiley Hooker 17 June 2009

This is quite witty and enjoyable write, Sam. like it! : -)

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Maitreyee Joshi 14 June 2009

it is a poem that exactly tells what it is, straight and true.the truth touches me.10

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Indira Renganathan 14 June 2009

Let your mind not sleep....otherwise we won't get such excellent themes from you....wonderful write

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Bob Blackwell 14 June 2009

Samanyan, I agree we should all share as the world belongs to us all.

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Vidi Writes 13 June 2009

A good take on the sleeping beauties Only wonder is how to get into such sleep. Anyway you have put the torch on... Now we can take the right corn. Good one.

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Lynda Robson 09 June 2009

Another wise write, let them continue sleepingand the world will be a better place, 10 Lynda xx

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Ency Bearis 08 June 2009

let this sleeping continue for a wonderful beauty dream....

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Seema Aarella 08 June 2009

let these sleeping things sleep forever and make the people and this world a beautiful place....a different thinking here....nice one!

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rago rago 08 June 2009

a beautiful write in beautiful words while awake...........

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Ravi Sathasivam 07 June 2009

'THE WORLD'S BEAUTY IS SEEN WHEN NATIONALISM IS SLEEPING' Your write is also beautiful. Nice poem

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Kesav Easwaran 06 June 2009

good propositions you make

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 06 June 2009

I think you want to see the beauty in its pure form, a situation persists rarely. Best wishes Naseer

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Ravi A 06 June 2009

The opening lines excel the rest. We can compare something to something when something is waking instead of sleeping. I think it would make a positive impact also. When we say that something is beautiful when something is sleeping, it means that when it awakens, it can explode the life. When we say that something is beautiful when something is waking, this element of explosion will not be there. It becomes just a kind of blossom. You are only shifting the scale but it gives a different mental proportion. Just think of that proposition.

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Naidz Ladia 06 June 2009

the beauty of your words are displayed again... the beauty where everyone seem to see is again in this lovely poem... how can i refuse not to read while this is well penned.. so beautiful dear sam, nice to read..naizz

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Sandhya S N 06 June 2009

Dear amazing! ! Your minds beaty is seen in the words of your poems! ! regards Sandhya

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Catrina Heart 05 June 2009

Beauty of all facets.................lovely and well said...............Thanks!

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