Monday, March 18, 2024

A Sleep Without Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

I close my eyes hoping to rest
but all I get is a mind full of pests
They jump and crawl, driving me crazy
I'd rather stay awake, sipping a jug of coffee
...
Read full text

M. Asim Nehal
COMMENTS
Kesav Venkat Easwaran 19 March 2024

A dream is always welcome in either state of life. A nice write well conceived

0 0 Reply
David Wood 18 March 2024

Disrupted sleep is its own nightmare. Try meditating.

0 0 Reply
LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 March 2024

The poem is crazy, but it's brilliant TFS Bravo! ! ! !

0 0 Reply
Rebecca Navarre 18 March 2024

May you find the most amazing and wonderous of dreams! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

0 0 Reply
Rebecca Navarre 18 March 2024

Very cool! .. What's the use of sleeping without a dream? Ever so awesomely composed! ..

0 0 Reply
M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
Close
Error Success