Wednesday, February 17, 2010

A Slave To Temptation* Comments

Rating: 2.7

She moved the plate
of cream cakes
away from herself
to the far corner of table.
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Ian Bowen
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Elena Sandu 20 July 2010

With her eyes still shut, she reached for her hard baked biscuit, and nibbled and cursed, cursed and nibbled.. then reached for the biggest cake. refreshing relaxing a poem that made my day, millions thanks! oh by the way you convinced me, I have no cake but some chocolate ice cream that scream for days: eat me! eat me! eat meee! ! ! -ok ok i'm on my waay! !

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John Oconnell 17 February 2010

a bit of light relief. it stopped me being serious for a moment. nice one! john

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