Tuesday, August 23, 2016

A Slave Girl Comments

Rating: 4.7

Believe it or not,
I was born in the Judean Mountains,
between Mediterranean and the Dead See,
somewhere in 2400 B.C.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rajnish Manga 24 August 2016

Very poignant narrative. What you have written is true even to this day- in one form or the other. The sufferings of the 'Slave Girl', which is a slur on humanity, have been captured nicely. Thank you, Akhtar Jawad Sahab.

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Kelly Kurt 23 August 2016

Damascus, Babylon, Jerusalem and many middle eastern and south Asian cities have known nothing but such fates for not just centuries but millennia. Besieged in the name of religion. A very poignant poem, Akhtar

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Abduhoo Salamath 23 August 2016

ooh...really i cant beleave...little diffrent type of poem.... nice...

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