A Slave Called Valentine Comments
THERE ONCE WAS A SLAVE NAMED VALENTINE;
she loved and loved,
but was again and again pushed away
she couldnt take it and moved and moved,
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so sad kind of like a romeo and juliet poem i thought it was really good
It seems more an opera than a tragedy, it recalls 'Rigoletto' by Verdi. Strenght of the passions is terrible, sometimes luckily somebody reminds us of it.
Excellent write! ! Keep up the good work and I will keep reading.
im not even sure what to say.. beautiful or elegant. not sure which.. it was well put together. and i like it a lot.
This is a wonderful write... a nice flow... Good use of words for a magical effect
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7/26/2025 6:03:00 PM # 1.0.0
good writing, and excellent fabric of words...