A Sip Of Wine Comments

This reminds me of some of the Cautionary Tales of Hilaire Belloc, though you do much more than merely relate a incident involving childish clumsiness. The key to the poem lies in the lines: 'She always seemed happy while drinking Quite unusual given her sad disposition' Hopefully his grandmother's message is heard by this young lad and he is able to avoid his mother's alcoholic path. Excellent write. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

This reminds me of the Cautionary Tales of Hilaire Belloc, though you do much more than merely relate a incident involving childish clumsiness. The key to the poem lies in the lines: 'She always seemed happy while drinking Quite unusual given her sad disposition' Hopefully his grandmother's message is heard by this young lad and is able to avoid following the alcoholic path of his mother. Excellent write. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

good that he was able to see his grandma's picture frame and was guilty.. Lovely narrative..

Curiosity led this lad into double trouble. I brings to mind a parent drinking and smoking, and saying 'don't you dare take drugs' to a child. They learn from their parents and I enjoyed your narrative very much. 10 love Karin

Sandra, what a beautiful story you have told us here and your attention to detail is impeccable. Top marks and thank you for sharing this lovely poem with us my friend. Hugs David