Wednesday, November 3, 2010

A Sinner Comments

Rating: 4.8

I met it twice,
It broke my dream,
it was surprise
with awful scream.
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Helga Valr
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ian McArthur 21 December 2010

The short lines read quickly, creating a sensation of confusion and something like panic, without breaking from a steady pace. Good writing, thanks for sharing

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Helga Valr 03 November 2010

Thanks, Niakeva. I'm so pleased.

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