Wednesday, April 9, 2014

A Sinner's Optimism Comments

Rating: 4.9

He had seen You, and talked as well,
Yet disobeyed, for him is the hell.
I haven't seen You, did not talk,
May I know, where I'll walk?
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Akhtar Jawad
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I Farted 20 August 2020

Face it. It is TERRIBLE!

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Khalid Saifullah 07 January 2015

a beautiful write.....................10

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Matthias Pantaleon 15 May 2014

The best mindset in the world is that of a positive thinker

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Ency Bearis 13 April 2014

An uplifting verses and well presented, well penned.

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Richard Blay 10 April 2014

I like it though it sounds as history but the moral is there, and so good. nice poem

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