Saturday, September 19, 2009

A Sinner (A Dream) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Heart Sobs,
Tears dripping
On her lovely rosy cheeks;
Down to the blank pages of her diary
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Terry Craddock 25 February 2016

Purity In Belief In God so beautiful perfect placing after the pain is restoration... so fitting to faith ascend purity in belief in God so sweet tender faithful inspiring... beauty of belief transcends lives free from torment attains peace in time with faith wounded souls heal grow strong in God's regeneration... Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'A Sinner (A Dream) ' by the poet Maia Padua. Dedicated to the poet Maia Padua.

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Terry Craddock 25 February 2016

'For her, he is a crime For her, he is a sin If he is a crime, She wants to be jailed forever If he is a sin, She wants to be a sinner for life.' so beautiful, the perfect placing after the pain of the first two stanzas, so fitting as your poem ascends into the next stanza and the next; your purity in belief in God is also so sweet tender faithful inspiring, the beauty of belief transcends lives from torment to peace in time, with faith wounded souls heal grow strong

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 22 September 2013

Maia, your poems, this poem is very touching. Ahh this could be a good movie, a nice story. You write so well. You never fail to reach out to others through your verses.

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