Saturday, August 22, 2009

A Single Wish Comments

Rating: 4.4

if I have one single wish
i’ll go back to the moment we kissed
where in your arms, I laid and rest
thousand times you made your promises...
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lady grace
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 19 June 2010

Healthy high calorie romantic wish…keep no doubt …sure to come true...he’ll be yours and solely yours..I too wish lady the same Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10+

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 31 December 2009

Hats off to your words, imagination and to the kind of heart you have :)

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Saadat Tahir 04 September 2009

lady...wonderful poem... touches deep down and works on you superb presentation well done cheers and ten

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Noel Horlanda 04 September 2009

How romantic, I remember myself using these lovable lines to one of my girlfriends when I was still a naughty teener. I wish I could go back to that exciting period of time. Hi-school days, yah know? That could be my single wish then...

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Courtney Loren 02 September 2009

i loved the meaning of this poem.. it was nice.. keep writting dear... cheers!

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 01 September 2009

Touching and most poetic finish. Ten dr. sakti

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Raj Nandy 30 August 2009

I CAN ONLY SAY THIS, THAT MAY THE GOOD LORD GRANT YOUR WISH! AND I WOULD LIKE TO WISH THAT WITHOUT TELLING YOU TO READ A POEM IN RETURN! MINE IS AN UNCONDITIONAL WISH! -RAJ

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Obinna Eruchie 28 August 2009

Wishes from the heart, rich and dear. A beautiful poem.

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This is so simply romantic......sweet and sensitive.......yet passionate too! 10 love Karin

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Rafique Farooqi 28 August 2009

That sweet wish.....for lucky moment......a hope that lingers in heart beats, remain vital with every breath, And with every move......

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Ying Escalona 25 August 2009

ug nag basa ang iyang mga ngabil sa katam-is pasiriti ko ding

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Deborah Cromer 25 August 2009

Dear wishes all written out from the heart. Deep and meaningful this is a very touching poem. There is sadness that escapes from your soul and talks to the reader. There is reason for all. We all wish to go back to make things different sometimes...but it is not to be. Accepting life as it plays out is so very difficult at times, we need to have strength. Find happiness and share. Thanks for sharing your poetry with me. DC

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 24 August 2009

passion well articulated. shan

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2009

if I have one single wish i’ll go back to the moment we kissed where in your arms, I laid and rest thousand times you made your promises....single wish to make your dreams fulfilled with strong desire and as tribute.....10 I shall continue to thrive Your spirit will live and may be revived I shall make it livelier than life Prove to be honest and dedicated wife .........read mine 'anniversary'

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Saadat Tahir 22 August 2009

yup.....its two to tango.... but u just accomplished a crane dance complete with beak rubbing and wing flapping...in words and lines... beautiful....loved reading it.... i am sending it to some friends ttoo.. cheers and ten naiz...welldone

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Fay Slimm 22 August 2009

Last two lines are telling Naizz, , , , 'it wasn't me who let you go - hope these are your wishes too.' may the reality you wish come true....10/10 from Fay.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 22 August 2009

The wishes God wouldn't hesistate to grant...........a good write..........

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Raj Nandy 22 August 2009

Well dear Lady, I do sincerely wish, that your single wish does become a reality pretty soon! -Raj

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Carl Harris 22 August 2009

This is a very lovely expression of love in nearly every line, Naizz, and I enjoyed reading this charming poem quite a bit. Sadly, we only rarely can go back and relive an old romance. But when we do, there is nothing else on earth like it! Carl.

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~ Jon London ~ 22 August 2009

A beautiful touch of your poetic heart Naizz...so tender in tone...it touches the heart whilst reading...it's a stunning poem my lovely lady...keep up the wonderful work....this's beautiful in every way...10++

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