Tuesday, October 25, 2005

A Single Tear Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shadows dance on the walls as I lay next to you,
I'm hypnotized by your breathing as you sleep.
I feel an overwhelming sense of peace within me,
which has caused a single tear to roll onto my cheek.
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skylar 18 November 2017

this poem touched me

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Barry A. Lanier 01 March 2009

Again revisting this one, , , and yes wounds are the battle scars of wisdom.....

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Barry A. Lanier 22 February 2009

A poignant portrayal of the cycle of life and its valleys and storms and the trail of tears...bravo, , , ,

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Ridge Cahill 01 December 2008

The title drew me in, the poem did not disappoint - well done.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 August 2008

....amazing composition.....10

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Cece Cook 24 March 2006

Wow, that one was really good! You really captured how people hide behind their past, and how it blocks them from what is real.....ooh I'm jealous! ;)

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Mary Nagy 25 October 2005

Very good poem Shelly. It is hard to overcome the past. (heck, I'm 34 and still trying) . Sincerely, mary

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Shelly Price

Shelly Price

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