Sunday, June 21, 2009

A Single Shot Comments

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a single shot whistled by
a single soldier falls and dies
a single silence shatters in
as he falls bone from skin
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Jacob Andrew Jarman
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Gayle Anne Goff 23 June 2009

JACOB A VERY GOOD POEM AND SAD TOO LOVED READING IT GIVE YOU A #10

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~ Jon London ~ 23 June 2009

When we remember the fallen brothers of the field, the soil drenched with blood and tears...An army of lions continue with full heart the battle for our survival....Your words are remembrance to the hero's that continue with our global struggle for peace......very well written....and thank you

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Carol Gall 23 June 2009

greatwrite deep and meaningful

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Marquel Walker 22 June 2009

great poem, deep meaning

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My favorite, very good meanings, I am in the Marines, It has an effect.

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Nothern Cross 22 June 2009

A piece that exemplifies the bravery and courage of the many people in the armed forces.

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Jacob Andrew Jarman

Jacob Andrew Jarman

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