A Single Sentence… Comments

There's a lot of white space between the poem and this comment box. I almost felt like Milton's Satan falling, falling, falling from the spacious heavens to the hellish confines of this box! ... Well, you've displaced the SEVEN DAYS of GENESIS with SEVEN WORDS, which probably can be found in some Kabbalah text. But the WORD not time is the key to G_d's creative power. (Are you familiar with the poet Ronald Johnson's re-editing of PARADISE LOST? It's called the first erasure poem. I ordered a copy from Amazon it sounded so rad.)