A Single Red Rose Comments

It's so beautiful! You're so expressive. And this piece is wondeful!

goes right down to the soul......truly heartfelt.....a wonderful piece.......so very sad......keep your rose :)

wow! so beautiful! 10+

Everything is there, the feeling the right choice of words within the lines...but I also agree..If your lines were broken down...this piece would have a greater impact on the reader...but if you've written it this way purposely...then...a wonderful poem never the less.......keep exploring my friend...you have soul

The content is good, I agree with Word Slave it would be better written as a poem in stanzas, keep writing, 10 Lynda xx

The poem in which you call it, does not at present read as one, not only because of the format, and the lack of structure but through the wording. There are some Ok lines in here, but i think with more editing and time you can develop this into a far better 'Poem'. In regards to the structure, please see my brief attempt at putting into stanza form, for me it reads much better, but in the end it is your work, and is down to you in regards to how you display the poem. A SINGLE RED ROSE a single red rose is all I hold Of beloved whose time on earth is done. A single red rose if I could could go back in time Where my beloved in my hand laced a single red rose. If I could I would go back to that moment in time not with time exchanged as he handed me the rose and on my lips he placed a Kiss. I so crave to look upon that face with his eyes sparkling blue: A single rose a single kiss is all I hold of my dear beloved. A single rose a single kiss my dearest beloved forever missed. I will never forget that rose or the kiss once placed upon my lips. keep writing WordSlave

a very very good piece.. top to bottom i think it flowed very well.... good thing you have it copyrighted. all mine are copyrighted as well.

Nice piece but I agree with Melissa, it would be better if you used the stanza format.

very beautiful and endearing piece. I couldn't go to your site, the link itsn't working.

Good poem, but try writing in stanza form.

nice poem dear lady............

I think ur poem is sweet im sorry for ur lost...but it was very heart felt....keep wrighting.

really great poem! ! ! i'm so sorry about your dearly beloved as the poem says, great wright! ! ! love it so much