Monday, December 6, 2021

A Single Mother Comments

Rating: 5.0

A single mother

Sit, rewind what observed.
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Nassy Fesharaki
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Unnikrishnan E S 07 December 2021

Part 3) " Has snowed, Drizzles, Her toenails Must be wet! " heart-rending. On the other hand, " Like trees in desert, Proud and confident, Walks around and tries To walk tall with pride.".. speaks volumes of the human nature. Great poem.

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Nassy 27 December 2021

You are so kind and clever that no word from me can tell you how grateful I am.

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 December 2021

Disturbing images: " See her shoes, Almost torn…", " Ran around like chicken, Dangling her cut head.", "

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 December 2021

Part 2. Quite disturbing images:

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Nassy 27 December 2021

Reality is something that we cannot ignore...we are responsible to be honest and vigilant

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 December 2021

Very pensive writing. Poignant and pertinent subject, fantastic poetic treatment. Evidently, the poet is a keen observer and totally humane. Very perturbing poem. Making the readers' eyes moist. Full score and myfav

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Nassy 27 December 2021

A poet, and in fact any artist, is a recorder and a judge that must be honest and aware of the fact. If not aware, must seek the truth.

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