Monday, July 14, 2008

A Single Kiss Comments

Rating: 3.8

Well, it is raining, and the raindrops make
Furtive areolas in the puddles of muddy bellies,
And their mists are like nebulous shrouds,
And unfertilized thoughts of maidens dreaming of
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Robert Rorabeck
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A B Faniki 02 October 2019

Nicely done. I love the flow of words. Thanks 4 sharing this heartfelt poem. great write

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Rebecca Lyle 19 April 2017

really wonderfully written work

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Brandi Guthrie 28 December 2011

I enjoy the tainted and akward words you used to describe such a simple and pure event.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 October 2009

Descriptive poem A Single Kiss well written. Ten Ms. Nivedita UK Please read my Poems: Why Hack My She [In Elite 500] Enigmatic Navel or others. niv

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Reshma Ramesh 13 October 2008

she leans outward.....beautiful...

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Caroline Weeks 17 September 2008

This is incredibly well thought-out and gorgeous. 'Her eyes so maple and October'-that is an incredible line! A perfect 10.

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Ujwal Bastakoti 15 July 2008

well expressed. I really like it

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