A Single Golden Leaf Comments
Blue seamless sky
Heat rising faster than the sun
In a race only tempered by a breeze,
I collapse under my faithful tree
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Lots of promise in 'A Single Golden Leaf'. I love those copper colors.
i got a tiny flashback of a summer, years ago, when i was reading this. thanks.
Beautiful extended metaphor. I would consider punctuation, however. This is the kind of poem that seems to need it.
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7/20/2025 6:04:14 AM # 1.0.0
'One more! I'll read just one more poem' The times cracking on... I sit here on my Lap-top... Feel my Wife's eyes on me... Time... Time.... Glad I picked this one.... Wonderful imagery.... Wonderful colours..... But Those eyes are winning.... Me thinks! RogerXx