Sunday, April 26, 2009

A Single Drop Comments

Rating: 5.0

rivers flow down my mountains
high peeks of crystal white
skies of pure blue garnished with stars
in horizons shining with light
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rowan ahmed
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I particularly like this poem because of the beautiful imagery used in the beginning through to the middle. You write straight from your heart and I give you 10/10 for encouragement to work through your rain to sunshine again. Karin Anderson

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Ariel Rousseau 27 April 2009

Interesting. I liked it. Nice flow and rhyming.

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Delicate Heart 26 April 2009

very nice poem, the theme has really struck me though some check spells in the words dropp, stading, triuph. well done........

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