Monday, January 30, 2006

A Single Crane Comments

Rating: 4.5

The apprentice went to see his master.
Utensils in hand, the master sat under
The bough of a tree laden with cherry blossoms.
Master, you’re writing I see.
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Martin A. Ramos
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Darrell Rohling 30 January 2006

Martin, very nice work, here; not only well-constructed as a story but elegant in your choice of words, to say nothing of its inspiration for me to keep writing! Thanks for submitting, I'll read more of your stuff... Darrell Rohling

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