A Single Candle/Death Herself Comments

a touching heartfelt poem.let me watch that sacrificing candle while giving and giving

Young lady, i do believe i may have just read the writings of a promising young artisan, on the horizon.Very nicely done...Do re-check your spelling, as grammaricals play an all too important role in good poetry being deemed accomplished work.Your stanzaec movement is smooth...and your storyline intriguing.Solid crafting, Bethany...Good Luck! ~ FjR ~

sick d00d i loved it :)