Friday, January 9, 2015

A Single Blanket Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's a big family in a hut of the slums,
It's too cold and they sleep on a mat,
A single blanket for the whole family,
He pulls blanket and covers his cat.
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Bisma Mirza 11 January 2015

Great! ! ! ! ! winters and Memories [3 10 on 10

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Valsa George 11 January 2015

Such scenes are not uncommon in a slum! Many are exposed to severe cold and are being frozen in the chilly weather! Here the drunkard is so callous and is least bothered about the well being of his family or children! A poignant write!

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Savita Tyagi 10 January 2015

A painful read. Cruelty knows no bound.

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Salini Nair 10 January 2015

its pathetic...mostly related to under developed countries....nice

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Rajesh Thankappan 10 January 2015

This as Khalid Saifullah says is a touching one.

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Soulful Heart 10 January 2015

poignant and tearful...............a drunkard irresponsible father can be the death of not only a family but a cause of all the evils in a society.......................

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Khalid Saifullah 09 January 2015

A heart touching poem! ......................10

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