A single Black Rose to turn the tide
A single Black Rose to make one die
A single Black Rose to ensnare the soul
A single Black Rose to widen that hole
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this is amazing! ! it shows many sides to one thing but it never makes the meaning of the one before fade! ! ! ! i hope you understand what i just wrote! !
The choice here was to recommernd or not to recommend this poem. I liked the repetition of the Single Black Rose but I didn't like the rhymes very much. There is a fine line here that I simply chose not to cross. I decided not to recommend it. GW62
I must say this is my favorite by far. Your poems are better when they rhyme, in my opinion anyway.
A single black rose happens to be symbolise a lot of things in my own life... it is sensual and epitomises beauty and individuality... it is a powerful poem and even the death is not a sad affair, but almost a celebration.
I really love this one. While initially others may see only death and depression, I see a man who has love, has passion, has pain...I see proof that he his alive! I think this is my new favorite.
simply beautiful.......no black rose for this poem......wondetful flow that touches the soul...