A Singing Soul Comments

Nice. I enjoyed this poem.

nicely written. I enjoyed this one.

You and I are here as a living proof That we were made of external day To be molded into truth And then, by the wind, carried away... Viking landmarks of a poetry for you in this stanza or the lines or verses.Simply awesome and truth portrayed with such simplicity against the wall of dilemma-life

The co-relation between heart and soul is beautifully expressed in this poem. Moreover, the difference between real and imaginary, as stated heart and soul, is absolutely an outstanding terms like life and death. A really beautiful poem my friend and my brother. I can realise the softness of your heart through this poem. May God bless you. with my best regards.

very good... much human wisdom here!

As always, a superb effort Mr. Della Valle, from one New Yorker 2 another...No bias tho'...Top Talent can't be guised in any other suit than than a straight of Aces, my friend...~FjR~