A Singing Broken Heart Comments

A beautiful poem about the flower. Each quatrain is nicely written. a good write

This is a very beautiful poem. you are very good with descriptions. this poem makes me think back on all the flowers I have stumbled across. I find it amazing that people liveng so far way from each other in different countries from different ethnicities, love truly is universal.

let your heart sing be it broken, for a song sang by a broken heart is still a song and for sure a heartfelt one. very metaphorical.

you are a really good poet. your style of writing is smooth and easy to read, and it has deep meaning. keep up the good work =)

Flower poems like this one are great :)

nice imagination used. sadness in a poem with flower...unique. okay, what do u mean by, 'breaking boy hindrance.' sorry, i am not gettin what r u tryna explain here. ERRORS 2nd verse, last line, the word 'gee' is verb/exclamanation...i dont see u usin it in either form. is one line missin in the 4th verse.! ! ! ? ? ? 'But it dejected and made dark my happy world.' u just want to rhyme 'word' with 'world' and it's done forcefully... forced rhyming...so doesnt go with the flo of the poem, try rewriting... i dont think there's a word like 'discaused'... can understand what u r wantin to convey but certainly it's not suiting. 'appriciated' will come instead. 'but they made no sound' will come instead. 'between hearts a rine. ' what's rine? ? ? ?

Metaphorically very sound n’ strong emotionally lithe …enjoyed … thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Mohammad-ji Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

very touchy and nice poem. thanks for sharing.