Thursday, August 13, 2009

A Sing Love... Comments

Rating: 5.0

same as the moth, to the lamp flying,
I go to you, through, by my passion.
because it now, that a future spring.
and she is nice and she loves to sing.
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Maria Barbara Korynt
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Dagmara Anna 13 August 2009

Poem written lightly and with feeling, shapely. It is flowing during the reading. Ideal job with rhymes and with syllable. Very much I like it.

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