A Simple White Coat Comments

Dear Dr.Sameer, Well said! Let's hope, you will always cherish it for long! yours, ashish

White coat- medical profession- service Nice poem, love it.

In a profession where being humble, as you carry God's gift of healing in capable hands, is payment enough....do we value our Doctors enough?

life is worth living... people are greatefull for their work Best wishes, Sabrina.

good one it is about u my fellow humanistic touch ur thoughts is derived to mind and the good work oh, this is really taugh hard career! Allah' madad

This poem has soo many meanings, in my interpretation. Amazingly expressed! May our belief's and value's stay strong! Sincerely Jen

You have covered the medical profession well in this. Overall there is a good flow and rythmn in this, although there are places where it disjoins but then it seems to fall back into the flow. Well done and well expressed. Enjoyed the read. Many blesings to you

This piece really states how you see your upcoming profession. I can see you have a good heart. Great job.

Metaphorically... Meaningly to choose a profession of the doctor, almost will make friends with death … Good luck to you …/10

Medicine is really such a noble profession and you have captured in this poem the sacrifice and the devotion of doctors who are true to the Hippocratic oath they took. But I felt that towards the end you have injected a stray thought of doctors probably becoming jaded with the routine they live with life and death. A feeling of emptiness despite the noble service they render.

dear little one, am confused if ur a nurse or a doctor or any related to medine...but i know ur a good person...white coat represents white job.. the way u deliver ur poem is very visible for me that ur a good person with good heart..if ur a dr, then the white coat is a reward in ur profession.keep ur wrk good, show it in the lines of poetry....ths is a good start little dear one..u must be nspired, , , , thats the essence of a good lover of nature.. keep up the good performance.. naizz

very true about doctors, Sameer.

Very nice writing. You are still very young. I would be very interested to see you visit this poem in, say,5 years, and perhaps re-write it. Good start.

Wow truly wonderful. Such an inspirational piece.10

well done Sameer, compassionate thoughts. a great poem. Thanks sharing. 10 +++

VERY TRUE, VERY NICE..... AS A DOCTOR I CAN UNDERSTAND ALL YOUR FEELINGS, EMOTIONS WHEN YOU WERE WRITTING THIS POEM. REALLY VERY GOOD.

Great writing and a great Tribute to all the Men and Women who see every day the suffering of the ill, and do their best to alleviate suffering....10 they are truly Unique

A white coat that is colourful in its beauty. Well done.

Very powerful....10 I could feel your point of view

Beautiful feelings. Only a doctor with poet's heart can express such feelings in words. Very nice, touched my heart. May Allah bless you!