Saturday, February 16, 2013

A Simple Task Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just told you not to drop it,
o the merchant of Madrid!
My heart is made of glass,
it's fragile, care it did need.
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Neela Nath Das
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M Asim Nehal 02 December 2018

Heartfelt poem. Nicely thought and written.10+++

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Rajnish Manga 02 December 2018

A very heart touching poem written with philosophical flair. Loved reading it. Thanks & Congrats, Ma'am.

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Subbaraman N V 10 May 2015

Thanks. Let me try! ! ! ! !

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Heather Wilkins 25 July 2013

even thought there is a broken heart, I'm sure someone can repair it for you. a good read

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Heather Wilkins 25 July 2013

even thought there is a broken heart, I'm sure someone can repair it for you. a good read

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Chandra Thiagarajan 17 February 2013

Even with a true heart I'm apprehensive if I ever could repair the broken heart so shattered!

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Hardik Vaidya 16 February 2013

Subhan Allah Haripada Da, a brilliant poem, a poem that beats, a poem that lives, a poem which still believes what a pretty little thing.

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